After presenting my Twitterive in class I received a lot of valuable feedback that I will be sure to include within my second draft. I was a little timid to present my Twitterive at first because a lot of my classmates had very personal topics. Mine however; although it was still personal to me, it made it easier to share because I knew I would be able to get through it.
What I am going to do first when I am revising is that I will be making it more about me and making it more about how I have evolved into a Thai fighter. I need to give a little bit more background about how and why I decided to travel around the world for this experience. I also need to organize the time of events when they happened during my trip to make it a lot easier for the viewer to follow.
What I am going to do first when I am revising is that I will be making it more about me and making it more about how I have evolved into a Thai fighter. I need to give a little bit more background about how and why I decided to travel around the world for this experience. I also need to organize the time of events when they happened during my trip to make it a lot easier for the viewer to follow.
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