My revision process for my Twitterive had a lot that I wanted to change or add.  I received a lot of great ideas from my partners as to what they think I should add or take out.  Once I started explaining what I wanted to get across with my Twitterive I was able to also come up with some other ideas on my own as to what I can do.  I know I want to include a video from YouTube that I personally think is an awesome video of a very skilled young girl.  I want to also include pictures of the Thai language and pictures of where I was training at so the people who are looking at my Twitterive get a better feel as to how it was when I was there.   I also want to change up some fonts and colors to make the important things stick out.  I need to add more genres and when we worked together in our groups revising our Twitterives I got some really good ideas, I want to make a postcard of some sort and include a picture that I took while I was there and make it into a postcard to use as another genre.